![]() ![]() Enough to even create an itchdotio account to leave this review/feedback! I couldn't be more pleased to have found this a day or two before Valentine's Day as now I'm so incredibly excited to finish this story in a couple of days! While I know these kinds of works are passion projects, I might consider you enlist the help of a bit of an editor or somehow engage with a test audience before future releases to get that detailed feedback. ![]() These are not things that people just say." While I understand that a bit of humor is a part of the genre here, I just think at times, the dialogue took me a bit out of it. And at certain moments I actually chuckled a bit and thought, "Okay. I think she came across as a bit too forward for me to suspend my disbelief. I would have liked if Evie were just a bit more shy and nervous given the subject matter. Some of the dialogue was a bit unbelievable to me. My biggest issue (and it wasn't that big!) is with the dialogue. Although I ASSUME that will be payed off in the last chapter. She's wearing that plug." But you find out later that she isn't. After the scene when she takes it, she shows up in a skirt and I thought, "Oh man. The payoff of what Evie pulls out of the drawer never showed up. I hope someday we are able to do that in some capacity! So I kept hoping there would be an option/pathway that would allow me to enjoy those pretty little soles and toes. I'm sorry to those who "aren't into it" or are repulsed by the fetish but I've got to mention it. I'll be that guy the lack of feet content. They seemed to be very basic or rushed and less detail put into them than some of the gorgeous closeups of Evie's face or set dressing. The closeups on some of the naughty bits were a bit disappointing. There's enough ancillary characters that make you curious about future releases of not only this title but a potential "Jonesy Universe" of games hopefully.Ĭons: I don't have much to offer that hasn't already been mentioned elsewhere unfortunately. There's plenty of steak here with the sizzle although it didn't feel too rushed.Īt the end of chapter 3, I was wanting moremoremore! Evie is addicting and makes the viewer never want her story to end. A good amount of buildup before any adult scenes is good but some creators take this too far and pump out two years of content with a quarterly update with barely any teases of anything more to come. Pacing was appropriate for a story of this length. The renders look great for the most part and are very easy and pleasant to look at. It's actually unreal how much they look alike.Īnyway, I was very pleasantly surprised! It was a very fun, cute, little story. I took a chance on a new creator due to the uncanny likeness Eve has to a person in my real life that I happen to have a huge crush on. I downloaded yesterday and played straight through in a couple hours. Show your support over on Patreon and get some cool perks and/or goodies. Or buy me a coffee and help combat my sleep deprivation Romance blooms as the dad not only struggles with the changes in the relationship between him and his stepdaughter, but also finally starts to come to terms with his late wife's passing.Ĭome hang out with me on Discord and talk about the game. They end up making an unscheduled stop during a snowstorm and stay in a cabin for a few days. ![]() Well, that didn't work out, did it? Oh well, no worries.Ĭhristmas Eve is the story of a single father (MC) and his stepdaughter, Evelynne who are on a road trip just before Christmas. I began this project at the beginning of August thinking (foolishly) that I could crank 4 chapters out by Christmas. I'm very new to visual novel development, but I am learning more and more every week. See the devlog for more info.)Ĭhristmas Eve is my first and only project. This addresses mostly aesthetic issues as well as a couple of typos and some renders that got on my nerves. At that point I'll make it v1.0.0 and consider it "complete". That said, it will remain "in development" at v0.4.x until I get feedback from all of you and make any other needed changes. Overall, I feel this is a much more polished product than before. I also went through and converted all my images to jpegs (finally), so the file size is MUCH smaller. I have also gone through the previous 3 chapters and tweaked a few things, added some "animations" where there were none before, and made some much needed corrections (typos, render artifacts, etc.). You will finally meet Kaylee and learn a little more about everyone else. ![]() Christmas only comes once a year after all. It's been really fun and fraught with successes and failures, but I've loved every minute of it and I can't wait to start the next VN.Ĭhapter 4 wraps things up for our beloved Eve. They say the story isn't about the ending, but about the journey to get there and this project is no exception. ![]()
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